Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields rather than just their major
Nowadays , I would say the more you know the more you grow . Considerating that the sources of knowledges are unlimited and our ability to learn and remember everything is limited , also the disponibility of the time is another factor that can not promisses us that we can finish everything in time ,makes me to disagree with the statement above.
First of all, I would like to say that our time is not enough for us to get everything done. If the university will require the students to be activ in different fields , it will make them dissapointed and they will quit the school, because they will not be able to succeed. I have this impression based on the experience that I had with one of my friends. Couple years ago, she was attending the university of pharmacy and she was very good student there. Her parents wanted her to be an excelent student and also to play the piano and play soccer! The first year she did great, but as the years passes the university became more difficult and she did not have time to study and play piano and succed in the same time. Thus, she became very dissapointed of not completing her taskes in time and quit the university.
Furthermore, our brains do not have the unlimited ability to learn and remebmer everything. In this case, if the students will be required to study in different fields, it will diminish the number of professionals. For example , if someone wants to study medicine and become a doctor in the future, he will need more time to get focused in his major field to succeed and be a good doctor and to be able to help people in a proper way. When my brother was in the university, they asked him them to study only the major fields and he, together with all of his clasemates becames very proffessional in their jobs.
Finally, I would say the best method is, to give the students an opportunity to choice if they want to study something else rather than their major fields and not to be required. For instance, when I was at school we had the option to choose if we want to study something else rather then our major fields. We were not required. They called this program ''optional'' , and we were able to chioce the fields that we were interested in. This was a good idea , we loved it and had fun. Have fun and learn is the best way to succeed!
In summary, when the universities required from the students to study many things the society will have people with general knoledges, but lack of proffessionals!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50223214286 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55079918857 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9575388095 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.055555556 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223709920753 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644830685927 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540481762338 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130308401963 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390384051242 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.