List some benefits and problems of having young kids play sports!
Having in consideration the fact that we are living in a busy world and the life is very dynamic, the online lessons sometimes are the only choice to earn knowledges that we need. As every thing is this life, online classes have their positive and negative sides.
In my opinion, taking online coursses is a best way to safe time. The time that we can spend to travel to the university, can be used to study at home, especially when our houses are so far from the school. For example, I live one hour away from the university and I choice to take onlice coursses to eran my degree for nurse. Thus, I am not required to drive one hour so I can study at home instead. Also, when you have small kids, you can take the classes being home with them and do not have to pay for the child care that is very expensive, around $500 for one week. What I am sayin, is that I take the coursses, watch the kids and I am saving the money that I should have pay if would send them in kinder care center. Studying online is a practic where you can safe the time and the money.
On the other hand, not everything is perfect with this method of studying. It has its unhappy side as well. There is a lack of society and being alone for long period of time can lead you to unsocialbe person. This can affect when you will go to work later. Couple years ago,I worked in a pharmacy and had a co-worker in my job that was very hardworker and a nice person, but she had hard time to work in team. She wanted to be alone in her tasks and was easily interupted by others. Furthermore, she was very shy.When the patients asked for something her face turned red always. She was not a kind of person that can be easily socialized, this was because of her online classes she was taking.
All in all, online lessons are the best way to get a degree when you are not able to attend the school, but it has its dark sides that are well known as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13672922252 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13835837261 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509383378016 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8463015388 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7222222222 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413280747244 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013009111877 0.076458572812 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253511376861 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0264612792317 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266886473068 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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