Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Since the beginning of this century, in all distinctive civilized societies, it has been a controversial argument among individuals, through which numerous conflicts have been engendered. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that life is much easier today than it was in the past, while others consider this issue in a whole diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all the opposite attitudes, I strongly concur with the statement that people live in a more convenient way then they did in the past. The outstanding reasons for my opinion would be explored as follows.
First and foremost, the advancements of technology have made the communication easy. To illustrate this, it is understood that people who lived a few decades before had so many difficulties in communicating with each other. For example, I remember my grandfather once told me that they had to use telegraphs in order to contact with someone in other cities. However, nowadays, one can easily have access to whoever he/she wants in every part of the world. For example, I personally have so many friends all over the globe, and I am able to contact them whenever I want via applications such as Skype, WhatsApp, etc.
Furthermore, the condition of workplaces has gotten better and better through the history. Moreover, today individuals have a broad spectrum of choices for their careers. On the contrary, much of the work choices that our grandparents had had required more both labor and energy. For the sake of clarity, there are much careers that even did not exist in the past such as human resource manager, or every work that needs computer skills. From my personal experience, I can remember my grandfather stated that in their town, which was a small town in Iran called "Saveh" they only would be able to work on a farm or work as a worker to construct buildings. Either of the options would be arduous and require much energy than our careers do.
Apart from the points that have been made above, there is also another reason that deserves some words here. The condition of hygiene has become better than it was in the past. Nowadays, not only do we have more hospitals in our town but we also have better medical insurances. Additionally, some disease did not have medicines or solutions in the past such as cancer; therefore, people could either live a short term life or die. In contrast, today, almost all the diseases can be cured to some extent or even forever.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored in aforementioned paragraphs I fundamentally agree that we live more comfortably than our grandparents did.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 521, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...at people live in a more convenient way then they did in the past. The outstanding r...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... the work choices that our grandparents had had required more both labor and energy. Fo...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rgy. For the sake of clarity, there are much careers that even did not exist in the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in spite of', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217131474104 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.157370517928 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0756972111554 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0717131474104 0.046263068375 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0577689243028 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141434262948 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0338645418327 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78682615174 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0159362549801 0.0309702414327 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.097609561753 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159362549801 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139442231076 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2666.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 450.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92444444444 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326666666667 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248888888889 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188888888889 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122222222222 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78682615174 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542222222222 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.98325463 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4285714286 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3298271737 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.952380952 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 46.3174603175 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.36805555556 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203292874625 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0780244356205 0.103427244359 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527357483523 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493824744339 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148420908127 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769447776232 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462521463682 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291639565013 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.059498491579 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133735760385 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290922374916 0.0618886996521 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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