Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Since the beginning of this century, in all distinctive civilized societies, it has been a controversial argument among ordinary individuals or even intellectuals, through which numerous conflicts have been engendered. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that providing too much information, the internet can cause some difficulties, while others consider this issue in a whole diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all the opposite attitudes, I strongly concur with the statement that the internet provides beneficial information for individuals. The outstanding reasons for my opinion would be explored below.
First and foremost, utilizing the internet, the students not only will be able to receive information but they also will be able to reach a better education. Some people would think that the internet has made students lazy. However, I believe just because students today have more access to more sources does not mean that they are lazy. After all they are able to do their assignments more effectively. My point is that, for example, I am majoring at industrial engineering and I have access to all the materials that is needed for my education via the internet. As a matter of fact, I will not be able to do my assignments as well as I am doing now, if the internet does not provide much information.
In addition to better education, the internet provides a large spectrum of information. If one wishes to obtain a profound knowledge, he/she will be able to combine all the different sources in order to achieve a deeper knowledge by using the internet. For example, if a student's field of study is chemistry, but he/she is also interested in biology, he/she will be able to combine both subjects in order to gain better knowledge. In fact, writing a paper is an arduous work since you have to incorporate all of your sources in order to write an appropriate paper. Although it would not be impossible without the internet, it definitely could be cumbersome.
Apart from all the points that have been made above, there is also another reason that I want to discuss about, and that is by using internet, people get to know each other better. That is not only does the internet provide information about subjects but also it gives information about individuals as well. For example, students will be able to get to know their professors and their fields of research by checking out their profiles on the websites such as Facebook. I realize that some people might think this is scary that others have access to some information about them, and they might feel that their privacy has been ruined by the internet, but I have to state that this issue highly depends on themselves. They are able to choose whether they want to discuss about their personal information or not. They can even choose what information they are willing to discuss about. That is, they actually define their privacy themselves.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments that have been explored above I fundamentally agree with the statement that the internet provides precious information. I believe the internet is beneficial because it provides better education, it has a large variety of information, and it helps people to know each other.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'after all', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198675496689 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.183774834437 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0761589403974 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0579470198675 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0711920529801 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122516556291 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0397350993377 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82323981291 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0397350993377 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00165562913907 0.00188951952338 88% => OK
Determiners: 0.0943708609272 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248344370861 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00827814569536 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3296.0 2387.08602151 138% => OK
No of words: 548.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01459854015 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344890510949 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273722627737 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213503649635 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125912408759 0.112833075102 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82323981291 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434306569343 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7723989187 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8333333333 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8159134715 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 50.2055961071 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.15343915344 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3288503413 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141903003152 0.103427244359 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118056826219 0.0752933317313 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514498974362 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125367075155 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117296710476 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736022805567 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311548965354 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0433336466697 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221158607821 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622907707872 0.0618886996521 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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