Agree or disagree?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems.
Nowadays the development of technology happening at a very fast pace. one of these advancements is the internet. views differ when it comes to the effect of the internet on human lives. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that internet has many useful advantages. However, others hold the opposite viewpoint and believe that the use of the internet creates many matters. In my viewpoint, the internet provides us much essential information since it helps us to improve our knowledge and entertain us.
The first aspect to point is that the internet gives all students a chance to enhance their knowledge. Today many students use the internet for learning new information. They taking online courses to improve their weakness in a specific lesson. For example, when I was at university my friend had a real problem in the math course. He tried reading multiple books but it did not help him. After that, he signs in online free courses which help her a lot and because of that course he passed the math course. Moreover, there are many forums that people can use to share their idea and learn new things. For example, my sister uses an English forum to enhance his English writing. In this forum, people write writing and send it to forum. After, people on the forum take a look at her note and send him tips on how to improve his writings.
The second reason worth mentioning is that the internet is a vital entertainment in our world. Because of the internet, there are many online chatrooms that many people visit. people can talk about their culture, their likes, their dislike and many other things in this chatroom. People who enjoy meeting a person from another country can use this chatroom. Also, there are many online games that many people play them. These games are really interesting since you are playing with other people. For instance, when my brothers always playing call of duty4 with his friends online. When they playing they are laughing all the time. My brother always says online games are a very amusing experience.
To make a long story short, emerge of the internet had a great influence on the life of the human race. It is obvious that the internet engendered copious problem for people but its merits is much more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: One
...chnology happening at a very fast pace. one of these advancements is the internet. ...
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Suggestion: Views
... of these advancements is the internet. views differ when it comes to the effect of t...
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Suggestion: People
...nline chatrooms that many people visit. people can talk about their culture, their lik...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... call of duty4 with his friends online. When they playing they are laughing all the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78717948718 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36442514068 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530769230769 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7499979341 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1481481481 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218912293668 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570722476862 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461027811629 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137713503129 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401012647995 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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