Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products look better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many aspects of a successful business and one of them is advertising. Personally, I think that in commercials commodities seem better than they are in reality. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, companies invite celebrities to advertise their products. When we see our favorite actresses or singer praising items, we prone to believe that these commodities are really great. This happens because we often consider famous individuals more knowledgeable and successful than ourselves, and so we tend to imitate them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have immensely dry skin and always look for new products to decrease my irritation and itching. In this way, a while ago I saw a video on Youtube channel where my favorite actresses recommended a new cream that allegedly has helped a million on women like me. She said that the lotion was the breakthrough in modern cosmetology. With no extra research, I decided to give it a shot and bought a tube in a local store. I was truly disappointed to find out that the cream comprised of the same ingredients than the most of available lotions and was not an outstanding one at all. This example illustrates how commercials with celebrities can trick consumers.
Secondly, manufacturers of products hide the truth about their goods oftentimes. While promoting new items companies stress their advantages, but stay silent about their flaws. Although sometimes from commercials people can learn about new products, consumers often overlook their numerous disadvantageous. For instance, a few weeks ago I came down with a cold and had to visit a doctor. On my way to a clinic, I saw a huge bubber advertising a medication to relieve symptoms of the illness. The text about benefits of this medicine was in bold and vivid. However, the information about its possible side effects was in a fine print and on the very bottom so I could barely see this. If I had not read about drawbacks of the medicine and had taken it to relieve my sickness, I could have suffered from side effects.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that advertisements are often deceptive. This is because famous people take part in them, and because producers conceal truth regarding disadvantages of their products.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98155627878 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2084128044 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.347826087 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941779091549 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275042707931 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287021178256 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562433284658 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330063176183 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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