Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
These days, people spend more time at their workplaces than with their families and friends. For this reason, it is crucial for us to be satisfied with our jobs. Personally, I think that employees enjoy a versatile work routine more than a uniform one. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a diversified job keeps employees focused on their tasks and because of that their work days go by quickly. On the other hand, if work routine is monotonous, people will feel bored and probably will start thinking of another job opportunities. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I am a pharmacy technician and while on duty I have to accomplish a myriad of things such as enter new prescriptions into a computer system, count pills, and interact with customers in person and over the phone. These numerous tasks keep me constantly busy and in fact, when my shift is over I feel like I just started it oftentimes. As a result, I truly enjoy being a pharmacy technician and I am looking forward to continuing working with my employers for many more years. That is why I believe that when companies challenge their workmen with varied assignments, they interest them.
Secondly, versatile employment helps people to establish a career because when individuals have to perform different duties, they can learn about each of them in detail and increase professionally. Hirers prefer to offer positions to seasoned people and if these individuals handle their responsibilities properly, they will be promoted in the future. For instance, my first year as a pharmacy staff member was tremendously challenging. I had to learn how to process prescriptions, deal with angry patients and resolve claims from insurance companies. However, after that time span, I was able to successfully master many aspects of my job and became a valuable member of the team. As a result, my supervisor noticed my professionalism and rewarded it with a new position of a pharmacy manager`s assistant. Although there are many other ways to excel in a workplace, handling a variety of work obligations well is the fastest route to the success.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people are happy when they are involved in a variety of duties during their work shifts. This is because it makes their routine fascinating, and helps them to excel in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting, and helps them to excel in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94320987654 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94907858015 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7108189012 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157716605802 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044074313204 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468159424278 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958090989075 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026343344746 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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