Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes they made in human's life. In the distinctive civilized societies, one of the most perplexing questions among individuals is whether most of the commercial programs tend to display their products better than they really are or not. A plethora of people is in the conviction that companies are so generous about their products and try to present a better image of them, while others take a radically diverse viewpoint. Although both attitudes have their own merits and drawbacks, I postulate that latter attitude is in general more convincing. The ensuing paragraphs will shed light on my perspective.
First and foremost, if the companies did not bluff about their products, some people would not even take a look at them. As a matter of fact, in this crazy world, companies have to find their position in the market in order to make a profit, and how can they make a profit, if the costumers do not even notice their product? Therefore, they have to use what is called "white lie" to make their product or service appears different from other products. As a case in point, since people cannot distinguish between different products at first glance, if a company that produces ice cream would not utilize some strategies of modern marketing and advertising, it will not be able to sell its product even though it is a good product.
In addition, I postulate that despite the companies brag about their products in the advertisements, they tell the truth about the general features of the product. As an illustration, if an advertisement is about a type of bread, it cannot display something about its features that is not true; otherwise, the costumers can even sue them. However, they may be lying about something that does not matter, such as a famous celebrity always uses that type of bread.
Apart from the points that I have made above there is also another reason that deserves some points here. I believe that most of the people are pessimistic about all the advertisements, so they unconsciously do not trust all the things that have been said in a commercial; therefore, companies have to be creative in their advertisements.
By way of conclusion, on the grounds of the aforementioned arguments, I am of the opinion that more often than not, companies are inclined to bluff about their product in their advertisements. However, sometimes it is needed otherwise people would not pay attention to their products at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...mething that does not matter, such as a famous celebrity always uses that type of bread. Apar...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o be creative in their advertisements. By way of conclusion, on the grounds of ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in general', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204210526316 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.149473684211 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673684210526 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0736842105263 0.046263068375 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0715789473684 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149473684211 0.118717715034 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0168421052632 0.0351676179071 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.89084796199 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210526315789 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0968421052632 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210526315789 0.0209618222197 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126315789474 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2523.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96453900709 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330969267139 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25768321513 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19621749409 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144208037825 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89084796199 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498817966903 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.5496714871 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4375 20.5533526081 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8586035786 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6875 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.5533526081 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.205821513 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.25714285714 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188151715221 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127221368262 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0772453647611 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572738745773 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146271384101 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825748543131 0.114077575197 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705880293135 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338969197244 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0169160779223 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130360691915 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408249312672 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.