Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Correct training of the youngest is a challenging subject among the parents. Some mothers and fathers claim that their children should be familiar with the ways acquiring money, However, some other one do not think so. In my view, it is advisable that teenagers introduce how the money is prepared for them. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, wasting money is a current problem among even our some adults today, As a result, if we find some solution for this matter in teenagers, it will be valuable. For example, when I was in high school, I spent much money for buying precise gifts for my friends. Had not I spend so much money for unnecessary thing that time, I could had my desirable calculator.
In addition, financial management is very crucial in life, and it is better to introduce kids to this concept as soon as possible. For instance, when I was a little child, my father gave me some money each mount. I had gathered much coins after about one year, in that I could bought my desirable bicycle. This experience thought me a lot, and I still organize my financial source for having more valuable and more necessary thing now.
Last but not least, having the sense of responsibility and in dependency in life is very likely. It is accquirable with correct and continue training from childhood. For clarify, I am a responsible and in dependent person now, I Have earn efficient money for buying car, house and other thing that many people like to have them. Not only have I visited some beautiful place, but I also have enjoyed from many delicious local foods. Besides, I help other-ones who need financial support. Had not my parent introduced me by ways of earning money, I might not have been so successful now!
In all, what drives some body to have a thrive life in economical subjects would perhaps fall in to 3 basic categories including money appreciating, financial management, and having responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...or unnecessary thing that time, I could had my desirable calculator. In addition...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e some money each mount. I had gathered much coins after about one year, in that I c...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'buy'
Suggestion: buy
...s after about one year, in that I could bought my desirable bicycle. This experience t...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...ble and in dependent person now, I Have earn efficient money for buying car, house a...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
... successful now! In all, what drives some body to have a thrive life in economical sub...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... In all, what drives some body to have a thrive life in economical subjects would perha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77101449275 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68589476075 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571014492754 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2874213718 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145793547397 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520682121502 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413486027688 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842049037781 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062023250438 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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