Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents should allow children to make their own choices
rather than determine their children’s future for them
There is no doubt that parent’s way of upbringing play a prominent role in children’s lives. No one can deny its influences on their behaviors and nurture. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether parents should let children to decide and make choices by own or parents should make a plan for their life and future. Although some people may hold the viewpoint that children should decide independently, the others take the opposite viewpoint that children cannot make choices by own and parents should determine their plans. From my perspective the first belief is true. In what follows I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons of mine.
One of the most important reason coming to mind related to the statement is that confidence. If parents do not let the children to make decisions by themselves they have not enough confidence to live alone. Thus, This behavior blinds children’s abilities to communicate with others and participate or even speak in communities. Furthermore this behavior will get worse when they grow up and they should decide carefully about their lives. For example one of my friends that accepted in famous university far from their home always had problem to make decisions about simple stuff like what he should eat, what he should wear etc. Hence he couldn’t communicate with others and made friends.
The other equally important reason is breeding dependent children. That is a big dilemma for children to have strong dependence to their parents. Children with this dependency can not cope with huge responsibilities and cannot be a proper leader, manager or take some important jobs that need crucial and temporary decisions.
The last but not least reason is children learn that they should be careful about their decisions because they are responsible to what happened after. They should understand that although parents are there and they can count on their help but they cannot blame parents for
From what has been discussing above we may safely reach the conclusion that making decisions by parents for children can endanger their positions in society and deteriorate their future lives. Moreover, they should less interfere in their children’s decisions due to make the responsible, more confident and dependent. But children can consult with elder especially parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27440633245 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83061197586 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522427440633 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3239162207 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.210526316 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41528191083 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129382980764 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804436208192 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249027873815 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788011667815 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.