Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why?
There is no doubt that watching movies and reading books play a prominent role in individual’s lives. No one can deny their effects on individual’s thoughts and behaviors. It is so natural that one book adapted from a movie or vice versa. Hence, some filmmaker make movies based on books and its characters. Experience shows that fan of book more like this method. A controversial question which is often raising this issue is whether reading books before watching film is more preferred or watching the movie firstly. Although some people hold the viewpoint that reading book before movie is more amazing, the others take opposite viewpoint and believe that we should read a book secondly. Respect to two viewpoint, from my perspective first belief is true. In what follows I will delve into my viewpoint with some outstanding reasons of mine.
One of the most substantial reason coming to mind related this issue is that no time limitless for reading books. Actually books have more time to develop characters and story. Moreover, by this description, books have more time to delve into the story deeply and expand the story by depict all character’s features and written about their life For instance, some years ago I watched a movie called me before you. After watching I understood that it made base on a book. I decided to read this book and realized that there were a lot of point that movie neglect them due to lack of time and budget. Hence, I decided to read a book firstly for these kind of movies.
The other equally important reason is that increasing power brain. Nobody can deny the effects of reading books for brain and. Furthermore, it causes mental health. If you involve the book firstly it encourage you to imagine all characters, situations and also sceneries. Therefore, when you are watching movie your brain is processing all you read in book and match them to what you watch and take into reality all you imagined later that as my point of view is more enjoyable.
The last but not the least reason is importance of higher level of reading book per capita for societies. As I mentioned before reading book has some substantial effect to our mind, behaviors and also the way on living. Some people are avid readers and prefer to reading books totally instead of watching movies. Besides, societies appreciate people for reading book and completely anchorage them to do more. Books help you to look at world through different lens.
If one weighs the merits and demerits of reading books before the movie that make based on it, one soon realizes that reading book firstly is more enjoyable and also it has some benefit for our brains and mental health. Hence, I
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Suggestion: encourages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1373.03311258 164% => OK
No of words: 464.0 270.72406181 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84051724138 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58396095006 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 145.348785872 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493534482759 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 419.366225166 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2287672799 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400527987989 0.272083759551 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1108615649 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872322896492 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242401975228 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574256068971 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 63.6247240618 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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