coal ash

Essay topics:

coal ash

The article states that coal ash which is produced as a waste products in power plants although it is harmful for our environment but it does not need to regulate some rules to prevent its damages and then provide some reasons to support. However, the professor explains that the current regulation are not enough and there should be some rules to prevent damages and refutes each author's reason.
First, the reading claims that there are sufficient regulation that are performed. for example liner that is necessary for every power plants to prevent coal ash component from leaking into soil and polluted nearby environments. The professor opposes this point by saying that when new landfill or pond is constructed, they facilitated by liner and the older ones still damage our environment and leak into soil and polluted our groundwater.
Second, the reading alludes that some predictions show that strict regulation about coal ash discourage recycling into other products. In contrast the professor states that These regulations do not mean to stop recycling these kind of products. There are other damaging material like mercury that is some restrict regulation for storing for long time and all people accept these rules due to its damages.
Third, the reading says that these regulation will cause increase in cost of companies and it leads that they increase the electricity cost that is unpleasant by consumers. The professor cast doubt on this point by explaining that although the cost is about 50 billion dollars and is huge but averagely it increases the cost of electricity about one percent for every consumer that he think it is not big price to pay for having clean environment.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...t coal ash which is produced as a waste products in power plants although it is harmful ...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...fficient regulation that are performed. for example liner that is necessary for eve...
^^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itated by liner and the older ones still damage our environment and leak into soi...
^^
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...urage recycling into other products. In contrast the professor states that These regulat...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...gulations do not mean to stop recycling these kind of products. There are other damaging m...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, still, then, third, for example, in contrast, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08602150538 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59226773425 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6238258303 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145049380944 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671437440937 0.0996497079465 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10385151918 0.0662205650399 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945003399859 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546934860073 0.0443174109184 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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