Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children`s education than were parents in the past.
Undoubtedly, nowadays, one of the most noticeable matter for parents is their offspring`s education. A plethora of people may hold the view that parents, today, are more engaged in their children`s education compared to parents in the past. others, on the other hand, radically take an opposite opinion and allege that the proportion of caring on educational issues are still the same for both previous and today parents. I am of the opinion that the former idea is true. my reasons are manifold, two of the most conspicuous of which in order to justify of my view will be explored in the following essay.
first of all, one of the most remarkable points of this claim is related to this importance that, in today world, the number of children having each couple have significantly decrease. In other words, the members of each previous family was so huge in comparison to today family. As a matter of fact, in a previous family with an immense number of children, parents could not spend much more time with their all children, so they are not involved with their education`s issues. On the other hand, regarding this significance that parents do not tend to have so many children, they would prefer to have few children with high level of education level. Similarly, in order to effectively foster their children, parents are more involved in this kind of issues.
Second and equally exquisite point of this assertion is about this fact that in today world parents are more careful about their children education since they completely aware about the huge consequences of education on the level of life. To shed more lights on this fact, the outcomes of a recent survey in my native country, Iran, could be a good indicator of this claim. According to the results, 75% of today parents tend to send their children to the university. Beyond a shadow of doubt, this statistic test demonstrates that rate of caring for having educated children noticeably rise.
All in all, regarding aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that parents today pay much more attention to their children`s education for the sake of two reason. first, since they have few number of children so they have much more time for them, and also awareness of having high quality of life by being well educated will force parents to dedicate more time for their children`s education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, similarly, so, still, well, kind of, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97263681592 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79911325671 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465174129353 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.608767121 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9375 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367114587444 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139244348569 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104804248911 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242055641341 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374348981662 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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