large or small universities?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for universities professors.
In this modern world, which its progress is directly related to educational achievements, a development community requires educated members in order to go toward success road. However, a controversial question which is often raised regarding this topic among human beings is whether or not university authorities should dedicate more money for their professors in order to fortify education`s quality. I, to a considerable extent, hold the view that it is not a constructive solution that for enhancing the quality of education, university administrators should spend more money on their professor's salaries. my reasons are manifold, two of the most conspicuous of which in order to justify my opinion will be explored in the following essay.
Firstly, one of the most remarkable points for this assertion is associated with this importance that recruiting prestigious professors could have more lucrative implication compared to increase their salaries. In other words, the professors, teaching at university, must have a deep and profound vision that teaching the next generation inherently is one of the most noticeable duty of them. And university must have very meticulous for selecting professors having these sorts of insight. Therefore, as a significant result of this selection, the professors precisely are aware about their location in raising a reliable, effective future maker. And also, they will not work for just money purposes. Undoubtedly, spending more money for professors will be able to increase their motivation in order to devote themselves for academic goals, it must not be considered as an impetus. personally speaking, I basically think these kinds of professors with these sorts of thoughts must not have a place in the faculty of a university.
Second and equally exquisite point of this claim is about the fact that although an immense section of the quality of university`s education is directly related to its professors; I believe that there are several environments that they need more investment. To shed more light on this matter, consider a situation that an electrical engineering student decide to work on a practical project. In this project, He require several facilities such as an equipped laboratory, useful and strong computer systems, a powerful sources and so on and so forth. consequently, investment on these kinds of fields could be more positive impacts on the efficiency of the outcome results of the university.
All in all, considering the aforementioned arguments, we may draw a conclusion that although allocating more money for professors could encourage them, the task of recruiting more enthusiastic members could have better effects on quality of education. And also devoting money on different academic subjects will have more impressive consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50688073394 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1603232565 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6674121535 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.235294118 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24260675845 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809836065454 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923097358298 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151031087333 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458579209832 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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