Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the parents today are more involved in their children's education than the parents in the past, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people strongly disagree with this thought. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts I believe that the parents today are more involved in their children's education today. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view:
First of all, in my opinion it is widely understood that today the parents are more involved in their children's education. Today there is a high competition between the students. If the parent want to ensure the good education to their children, they have to put them in the best school. Eventually, they have to spend a lot of money to ensure that they provide all their children’s education requirements. Additionally, they have to be the perfect model for them.
Another reason why I advocate that the parents today are more involved in their children's education is the technology development. The technology development provided many things that the children want to enjoy themselves with it instead of studying. If parents do not help their children to manage and control their time, the children will waste their time. And eventually, they will fail in the school
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the education material today developed and became harder than it was in the past. The are many assignments the children need to do as a homework and most of them should be found in the internet. The internet provides a lot of information so, the parent should help their children according to their experience to find the most accurate and suitable information.
From what has been discussed above we may draw a conclusion which says, although the people whom have different opinions may have the right to believe in. But my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... became harder than it was in the past. The are many assignments the children need to d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00581395349 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70177490086 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494186046512 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3477008599 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386190896108 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132526379291 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122838134642 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206346243123 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124921390382 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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