Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, people should do lots of things at the same time to keep in way of successfulness. This topic is controversial among individuals that people should do works coincident or not. In my opinion, people should not do their things at the same time, because the efficiency will decrease. In the following paragraphs, I will explore into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my viewpoint.
To begin with, most people are not multiple characteristics that cannot do things at the same time when they are so busy. Sometimes people have to do a lot of works which they need to make a plan for them. Moreover, if they recognize the requirements of those specific things, they can provide a better plan for themselves to do all of those matters in good shape. My own experience demonstrates this topic. Two months ago, when I decided to continue my academic regulation abroad, I had to do lots of works. First, I had to pass my exams with good grades which needed to study much for them. Second, I have to learn the English language to take a required score for the university. As a result, I have made an adequate plan for myself to do my issues at the best time.
Secondly, when people are so busy, they have not a good sleep to be fresh to do other things. Everyone needs enough sleep in a day to do well their works. They need to sleep not only to be energetic for the next day but also to focus on their jobs to do them well. For example, my father will sleep soon to do his job comprehensive. Consequently, he always can do all of his works in good shape.
To sum up, when people are busy, they cannot do things well. This is because they cannot focus on many things at the same time, and they do not have sufficient sleep at night to be a freshman for tomorrow.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4156626506 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5956848494 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484939759036 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3609500952 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1578947368 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317129477018 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117097538549 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657941959581 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219875602116 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192689889958 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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