Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, any job has a great value and if one of them does not work efficiently, it can make a detrimental consequence on society. Moreover, teachers as an important part of the community should be more appreciated. As a result, this is a controversial topic among the people that teachers need more value in a society that can influence them to do their job in a better way as possible. In my opinion, teachers are more appreciated currently more than in the past generation. In the following paragraphs, I will explore into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my viewpoint.
To begin with, teachers have a great role in society because they make educated persons and people understand the value of their works. If a community wants to reach modernization, teachers would be more thankful. Teacher's work is on the first step of this process which can pave the way to approach the desired country that is modern in every facet. Consequently, providing a nice condition for teachers is a vital action that all members of society should do it and respect them. For example, we have a teacher's day in our country that students and their parents will take part in a celebration for the school's teacher. This action from us has a considerable impact on teachers to put all of their efforts to do their job as well as beforehand. In consequence, teachers are grateful in all countries because of the crucial impact on society.
The second noteworthy point is that the government makes a good plan to support its teachers and this operation is to appreciate them. The government has a great role in the curb of society. Initially, it has to recognize the importance of such a great job as physicians and teachers. After a while, it should support them because of their impression on society. As a result, the government can play a role to help their lives, and they focus on their jobs more than in the past.
To sum up, teachers are more thankful recently because individuals understand better teacher’s work and their important value in society, and the government which arises from the people can help them by conducting a plan to support their cost in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...nd respect them. For example, we have a teachers day in our country that students and th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...will take part in a celebration for the schools teacher. This action from us has a cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7889182058 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86001469812 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451187335092 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6388446849 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198533931248 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706205925884 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518355434779 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131753596593 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455827144384 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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