Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, it is useful for factories or somewhere else to employ workers who can do so many tasks on a workday. Moreover, individuals have a satisfying feeling about their job, and they do it efficiently. In my opinion, generally, working on different tasks on a day is better than working on similar tasks on a day, especially for the workers who are engaging in this. In the following paragraphs, I will explore into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my viewpoint.
To begin with, workers can manage themselves to enormous situations that are practical for their future. People like to feel every facet of life, and it will be boring for them that their lives will be as a resemblance to the last day. Furthermore, individuals want to participate in many groups, institutions or charities to make themselves busy with so many tasks. As a result, they can enjoy more and more that it can enhance their quality of life. My own experience as a worker demonstrates evidence of this. I was working for a company and coincide with that I tried to take part in a group which helped poor children in the city. Working at the same time on two projects, motivated me to put all of my efforts to be successful on them because it was appealing to me and it could teach me that working on so many tasks in a day helps us to be a complete person in the future. I can tell others about my experiences from the past. Consequently, working on many tasks will help us compatible with different circumstances. Secondly, working on two or many tasks in a day will help us to meet different people with different features, and we can make friends. Collaborating with people with different characteristics not only helps us to recognize our talents but also helps us to make good friends. Although, working on many businesses is harder than working on similar tasks, but it is a vital action for us to do many jobs in a day, specifically when they are at a young age. That is because they have so much energy, and they can adjust themselves to many jobs. In consequence, working on different tasks provide them to work with people who are unknown at first, but after a while, they can be their best friend.
To sum up, working on so many tasks in the day is better than working on similar tasks. This is because workers can put themselves in different situations in life, and their experience will increase, and working on different tasks can help them to find some new people to make a friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...ase, and working on different tasks can help them to find some new people to make a friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58574610245 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76869935217 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427616926503 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7339042724 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.95 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273570041762 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951705607237 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720401689683 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224471354628 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736531491956 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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