Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
teachers are a crucial part of our society. The future of every community be determine by instructors who really need to be supported by all different section of society. Some people believe that nowadays citizens do not take care of teachers and do respect to them, while others hold an oppisite view. In my opinion, nowadays all individuals appreciate teacher more than in the past for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that these days government allocate special facilities for teacher in order to cherish them. In the past, leaders did not belief that teacher had important role in progressing society and so they did not be valued by people, whereas now by changing infrastructures, fortunately, all persons notice that teacher can influence on the whole constitution of community. Therefore, government set several boon such as free home, high wage, and so forth for teachers in order to support them. For example, my father has been teacher since 1980. he says that when he started to become teacher in the past, all teachers had serious problem in their life such as low salary and equipment. Consequently, they could not focus on teaching to student because they should work other job at same time. However, now they are advocated by not only government but also all people. Sequentially, they can concentrate on their task and be beneficial for society more than the past. As you can see, teacher have a pillar of community that they can impact on everything.
The another reason is that now children respect to their teacher than the past. Although teachers all the time help to society, in the past students did not value to them because of lack of knowledge about worth instructors. Notwithstanding, now by arrival advancement technology, all people, especially pupils, be informed how much teacher are beneficial for community. For instance, my mother talked me about when she was student about 20 years ago. that time, all students tried to bother their teacher so as not to allow them to schooling. Even children did not say hi to them. while, when I said about these days how children respect to their teacher, she surprised about this point and believed that social networking and other equipment impacted on thought of student that teacher should be appreciated by all people. this experience teach me that as over time all individuals notice that teacher are very important in society.
In conclusion, these days people cherish teacher who really try to progress society whether by government and giving facility to them or students. we all should respect to them in order to encourage them if we want to assist to our community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, really, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02466367713 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7202077963 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504484304933 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5527935903 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4347826087 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169676068813 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590022140829 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453463585128 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108614981503 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543242920993 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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