Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have so much to do during a day. Something like working, taking care of their children, preparing food, and so on. I agree with the statement that say, people who are busy doing so many things will not do these things perfectly. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs will represent a cursory glance of the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to explain my stand point is associate with the fact that most people get distracted if they do more than one thing at a time, and this will lead to imperfections in each one of these things. For instance, yesterday, At about 11 am, I was preparing food for my son, at the same time, The door bell rung, Furthermore, my kid was crying, because he was hungry. With these happened to me at the same time, I got distracted and the result was I burned my baby's lunch. So, doing many things at the same time will lead to a negative result, because of getting distracted.
The second rational behind my opinion is relating to the idea that trying to carry out many things in a specific time means less time will be spend for each task, which will also lead to imperfection. An example about this point is relating to an article that I read 2 weeks ago in my college newspaper, This article talked about student's performance during the exams. Saying that many students do not do well in the exams because they study the material the night before their exams. This made them spending short time for each section of the book, which might be not enough to cover everything.
In brief, contemplating all the reasons, people who are doing many things at a time, will do few of these tasks well. This is because they get distracted by the huge amount of things they have to carry out, Further more, because they will spend less time for each task which will lead to an unsatisfactory result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mind explaining
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for instance, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53097345133 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44146231719 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9995835051 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286813830677 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127137356701 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126039279304 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203445795395 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752822484854 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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