Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Busy parents spend their valuable time with their children in different ways. Some prefer to play games or sport whereas some help their kids to do school related work. I am of the opinion that it is always better to utilize time by helping their kids with homework or school related work. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, school related works are much important and how well children perform in school decides their future career. It is parent's responsibility to make children understand this fact. When parents support kids in school related work, kids will take studies very seriously and try to give full effort to do the same. In contrast, if parents indulge more in fun activities, kids may get confused about what to prioritize in their life. As a working mom, I try to give more attention to my kids school home work and projects and make sure that all the works to school and exam preparations are perfect. As a result, my children understand the importance of higher grade in their academics and they strive to achieve it. When I compare my kids academic performance, they are far ahead of other children. The fact is that their parents hardly find any time to help children with school work.
Secondly, I think kids can have more fun playing with their friends rather than with the parents. kids and parents energy level and area of interest does not match easily ,so to best utilize the time and effort children should be encouraged to play with their age group. I allow my children to play with their friends in all weekends and after the game or sport they are very fresh and energetic. I never try to play sport with my kids because I know that I cannot cop up with their speed and enthusiasm. Rather I utilize all the time focusing on my kids educational activities.Thus my kids are served both in academics and extra curricular activities.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents should spend their valuable time in helping kids to do their schoolwork rather than playing games or sport. This is because academic performance of children have to be given much priority and because kids can enjoy sport and fun activities more with their age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72193877551 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44553195887 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466836734694 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5300498623 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300365674775 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113774518095 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785478039457 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218810395157 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542035318636 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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