It is tempting to think that the price of technological devices will fall a few month after they are available, hence waiting instead of buying them right away will be a wiser choice. Nevertheless, from my perspective, the experience of having the latest digital devices is uncompareable, so that it is better to own them as soon as they are relesed.
On the one hand, if one choses to wait every time he or she are considering of buying a new device, then the chance is high that one will always end up with using out-of-date products and missing the opportunity of experience a better and easier life. Apple company, for instance, update their product and release their new creations every September. Generally, the price of new version of iPhone will not fall until the another generation is created, which means one could only gain a discount when he or she are willing to use old iPhone. The benefits that comes form the improvement design or the advancement of technology are not availble for people who always wait.
On the other hand, waiting could not only cause one to miss the cooler and soomther experience of new device, but also cause one to have a worse experience of using old device. It is commenly acknowledged that, apart from hardware, the software of a device is also essential to users experience. As the hardware is continuly being updated, the software will have may adjustments to suit these changes as well. As a result, the old device will not work perpectly as it used to be due to the new software. For example, my old laptap cannot work with Windows 10, and when I have to repair my laptap, it is extremly probramatic as there are few fix shop that could deal with old version of Windows system.
Addmittedly, sticking to old digital devices will save money. However, with the help of insurance products such as Apple care plus, which could help you undate your iPhone with a low prices or even free, now it is possible to buy products that are both new and cheap.
In summary, it is more benefitial and smart to purchase digital product once new version is avaible to the market because nowadays people could have a better user experience with a relatevly low price and do not need to worry about the defuat of old products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...ce of technological devices will fall a few month after they are available, hence waiting...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one chose', 'a chose', or simply 'choses'?
Suggestion: one chose; a chose; choses
...hey are relesed. On the one hand, if one choses to wait every time he or she are consid...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...one choses to wait every time he or she are considering of buying a new device, the...
^^^
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...uld only gain a discount when he or she are willing to use old iPhone. The benefits...
^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...use old iPhone. The benefits that comes form the improvement design or the advanceme...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57548053769 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4491789608 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169311316723 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576856322735 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350110626687 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982438426137 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205880614895 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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