Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
It has long been a hot controversy among contemporary scientists that of the two options of teachers and friends which one has more effects on students. Answering to this question is imperative as it deals with psychology of the minds. When it comes to me, I think teachers have more effects on students. However, as the English proverb goes a coin has two sides, those who take the opposite view are partially reasonable.
The first plain reason for my propensity is that students know that teachers have more experience and knowledge. I will exemplify my point with a true story that happened to me. I remember when I wanted to select my major in the university, one of my teachers gave me an incredible advice. He briefly told me, I should follow my dream and select the major that I like, not the major my friends want me to choose. I am happy to listen to his advice not the advice of my friends because I knew that my teacher is a more reliable person due to his knowledge and experience.
The second reason that I should mention is that students see their teachers as a successful person in life. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light to this point, in high school, I was always looking at the habits of my teachers, as I was thinking they are very successful in their life.
The last and most important reason is that friends in high school and university do not trust each other in so many cases as a truth worthy source. According to a research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, students are skeptical about the advice of their friends in critical situations and they tend to listen to a more neutral source like a teacher. As the Persian proverb goes, do not always listen to your friends as they are blind to see so many things because of their affection toward you. As far as I am concerned, it is always better to take advice from more neutral sources like teachers and mentors. For example, back in high school, my friends were glib when talking about my best chance for choosing the future university.
To conclude, considering the above reasons, students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends because they see their teacher more reliable, truth worthy and successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'incredible advice'.
Suggestion: incredible advice
... university, one of my teachers gave me an incredible advice. He briefly told me, I should follow my...
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Discourse Markers used:
['briefly', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202733485194 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.150341685649 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104783599089 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523917995444 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.116173120729 0.0685040099705 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127562642369 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0205011389522 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57499731792 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364464692483 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0774487471526 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00911161731207 0.0209618222197 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159453302961 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2273.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61234567901 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325925925926 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23950617284 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158024691358 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938271604938 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57499731792 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479012345679 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 51.9186153069 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8235294118 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5038688039 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.705882353 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.7741466957 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.1 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257561961469 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125318431653 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0874683167338 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577472382952 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156674043961 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1058396824 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991651550933 0.0781384742642 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29629486701 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0429064873418 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204572137564 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135438084707 0.0618886996521 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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