Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it goes without saying that most of the people around the world have a dream of being successful because it is a precious social attribute which brings confidence and satisfaction. There is not a specific way for being a successful person but when it comes to the personality of these individuals, some believe people should be a risk taker and try new things rather than doing the same thing and staying in their comfort zone in order to succeed. I personally agree with this idea. In the ensuing lines, I will explain three reasons to substantiate my response.
First, people who try new things obtain a wide array of experience and information. these people may fail but after each failure, they gain new experience that can use them to improve themselves to obtain an achievement. In most cases when people speed up their failures they reach the success faster because they attain more necessary information in a shorter time.
Second, risk takers are brave and do not easily give up. being persistent is one of the most important characteristics of successful people. they try different ways and do not cease their efforts because they believe they would achieve what they are working for. A good example is Edison, he failed 1000 times before inventing it and every time he changed his way and perspective. If he was an ordinary person, after the first tries he would give up. he was not such a person and he got successful.
Finally, risk takers believe they deserve success. While some people do not believe in themselves and think success is for special and selected people, risk takers always imagine themselves as a successful person; therefore, they are ready to chase it and do everything to have it. Thus, their personality helps them to be more likely successful.
In conclusion, people who want to be successful should be open to new things and do not afraid of taking a risk. because risk takers gain new experience and information, they do not easily give up and overcome their fears, and they believe they deserve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64737991383 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1571087876 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297533478583 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959812502906 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755221206179 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185826465333 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537522136143 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.