Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From a broad perspective, in the current state of affairs we face, in which getting the decent education can play crucial role to create a bright future for the children, it is not far-fethced to presume that teachers, as in integral part of education system,can be accounted as one of the most influential factors to that end. However, the extent of connection between teacher's mindset and their student is considered as a contentious issue. There is a growing segment of people who contend this idea that students should not be congnizant of their lecturer's political point of view. I personally concur this idea and the following statement will be further elaborated on this perspective.
First and foremost, teachers are the role model for their students. There is no denying the fact that human, regardless of it age, is seeking to select someone as an ideal person to follow his lifestyle. Therefore, it comes as no surprise if student give this role to their teacher. According to the latest research attributing to Dr. Kevin Rude, a prominent and highly respected professor in the Department of sociology at the University of Macquarie, teachers are the most favorite individuals in the people, and in many cases they remain as the most memorable person in people's mind. This probe provides further legitimacy for this idea that due to fierce effect of lecturer's way of thinking on their students, it would be sensible if they did not expressed their political view point in the classroom.
Another vital point which should be taken into consideration is the stating their view have contradiction with free thniking. Needless to say that nowadays, education systems have been establish based on independence mindset. Teaching in such environment requires considering some issue in order to not deviate students mind. Although, it is true that children's attitude is alike paste and therefore are capable to easily take a shape and take steps in particular road, particularly before the college, teachers should wisely impede this occurance. As a matter of fact, in older ages, teacher's view may put student in jeopadry to restate their opinion and punish owing to disaaproval. COnsequentl,y telling the idea, in any ages, can aggravate the situation and bring inevitable consequences.
To wrap it up, it is more judicous to say that concealing the teacher's point of view from their fellows is the best possible approch. Not only due to their great influence on children as an acceptable character in their life, but also since their opinion may hinder or restrain children's mind to think deeply and freely.
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...pinion may hinder or restrain childrens mind to think deeply and freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, in particular, as a matter of fact, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11421911422 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81761395271 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568764568765 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7477035631 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.058823529 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188395445357 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644626941867 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454990417488 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11588025986 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110793325046 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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