TPO-41 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Out of all the professions that every society, no matter where in the world, strongly requires, teaching is perhaps the most prominent, pivotal and essential one. Not one nation can thrive and flourish without competent, adept and decent teachers. Therefore, teachers deserve to be respected and valued as they are the ones who train the future leaders of every society. Nevertheless, it seems that nowadays, teachers are less appreciated that they were in the past. I believe this to be a true and accurate notion for a plethora of reasons; and I intend to explain some of them.

The first reason to why I think teachers are less regarded nowadays is that parents tend to regard teachers as servants to them and their children rather than instructors of their children. If we pay attention to the modern families of today's world, we can see that parents tend to meddle in the work of teachers and undermine them in the presence of their children and other parents. What I mean is that the main cause that teachers are comparatively less valued is that school-children's parents underestimate the teachers and treat them with little, if no respect. To illustrate further, I will provide a personal example. When I was an elementary student, one day my classmate's mother came to school and she started yelling at our teacher in front of the whole school. Apparently, her straight A's daughter received a B and she wanted to determine why. This was the first time something like this happened; but from that day on other parents would behave similarly. The first parent who yelled at the teacher broke something that could not be repaired, the respect and value of the teacher. She could have discussed her problem in private but she didn't. And as a result everyone, even the students tended to treat the teacher with disrespect.

The second reason to why teachers were more appreciated in the past is due to the little number of the teacher in those times. In the past, not many people were educated and out of the educated population, not many of them chose teaching as their career. That's why people, students and their parents would respect the small number of available teachers a great deal. And would treat them with honor and gratitude. My father who is a 55 year old man, started his early education when he was 11 because no teacher came to his small town. Thus when a teacher went there, people would bring him gifts and food and would treat with utmost respect and appreciation.

In closing, I believe that due to the foregoing two reasons,in the past teachers were more valued by the society. Today, they are less respected than they deserve to be and this is something that has to be changed.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
...iscussed her problem in private but she didnt. And as a result everyone, even the stu...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...ated population, not many of them chose teaching as their career. Thats why people, stud...
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...of them chose teaching as their career. Thats why people, students and their parents ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ause no teacher came to his small town. Thus when a teacher went there, people would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, as to, i mean, i think, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77021276596 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57787711694 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491489361702 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4874221469 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4782608696 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171557763764 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570065450701 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660252248901 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121899733219 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285169437117 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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