In today's busy world there is no proper communication between two people, and if it comes to friendships, I personally believe that, it is more important to maintain friendships with small number of people for a long period of time for happiness than to make many more new friends easily. I feel this for two main reasons, which I will be explaining in the following essay.
First of all, maintaining good friendship is more important and it should be pure. When you are with your old friends you can be very happy because, You know each other very well and you both know the frequency of each other, you can connect to your friend very fast, but, on the other hand, when u have new friends with you, you cannot be so normally like you are with your old friend.
My own experience is a best example for this, I have one friend by name called Soumya, She is my childhood friend, we both studied in same school, same college and we lived near by to each other, when I will be with her, I feel very happy and I will be sharing my feelings with her. When I have some ups and downs in my life, I can share my problems with her because, she know me very well so that she can suggest me something better to overcome my problems. But, on the other hand, I have some new friends, I cannot share my situations with them because, I don't know how they take my problem and I can't even trust them, because I don't know much about them and I couldn't even share my problem with them.
Secondly, When you maintain friendship for long period of time there will be some kind of bounding between each other and they will not judge you so fast by your appearance or how you talk and how you behave, because they know you and if it comes to new friends, they can judge you as fast as they can and they can gossip about you with others too. For instance, My friend's experience is the compelling example for this, She was joined in a company for her internship and her first day experience she shared with me and she told that her manager and colleagues were talk about her dressing and they were gossiping with others but that is not what she is, because it was her first day to office, she dressed up well.
In conclusion, I am on the opinion that it is better to maintain friendship with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29735682819 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27406773755 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4140969163 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1733155879 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.1 100.406767564 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.4 20.6045352989 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1 5.45110844103 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320842871856 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170197306185 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168510257076 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270464671445 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174217848447 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 11.7677419355 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.55 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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