Those who have fame in the leading TV show and are widely known as the greatest runner possess such a stunning attractive , addictive performance skills which greatly affect on all kind of human beings. We all admire them in some ways. In my opinion, I'd rather asserting that those having a super power influence on not only the younger but also the older. My argument are listed as follows.
First principal reason is how celebrities such as entertainers and athletes are brightly enough to inspire many adultescents. Especially, people generally have a found of watching sport match so that sport experts are on the shiny light spot as high percent and loved by children. Take my brother as an example. My younger brother love playing soccer since he found one of his favorite, admirable soccer player, Shunsuke Honda at 4 year-age. He started to play soccer as he merely enter into kindergarten because he are trying to advance day by day to realize his dream being professional national soccer player like the way Honda is. After 13 years, he still keep working out to achieve his goal at high school's soccer team and due to arduous practices, he are frequently late to come back to home every day including weekends. Notwithstanding, he always seems satisfying and happy making abundant effort to that because of his lasting dream. I surmise that not only my brother but also there are a lot of boys and girls who are inspired by spectacular athletes and will become amazing ones in next generation. This is a wonderful, productive circulation on the earth.
I'll finish here because it's time over sadly. Who are going to support such excellent athlete!? older people!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...unner possess such a stunning attractive , addictive performance skills which grea...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ictive performance skills which greatly affect on all kind of human beings. We all admire...
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Suggestion: I'd
...dmire them in some ways. In my opinion, Id rather asserting that those having a su...
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Suggestion:
...other love playing soccer since he found one of his favorite, admirable soccer pl...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enters'.
Suggestion: enters
... He started to play soccer as he merely enter into kindergarten because he are trying...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...rely enter into kindergarten because he are trying to advance day by day to realize...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
... way Honda is. After 13 years, he still keep working out to achieve his goal at high...
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Suggestion: is
...r team and due to arduous practices, he are frequently late to come back to home ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66369902214 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6555606841 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0468319644156 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160140226977 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028151800242 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270943979147 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211334235522 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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