Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When choosing a job, it is more important to like the job than to make a certain amount of money.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
when a person is on the verge of choosing a career, he mostly relies on his inner belief. The voice from within guides him to take career of his choice. personally, I feel that choosing a profession which one likes is the best choice one can make. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a work performed with interest always results in success and the person who is working for the job is not tired by doing it. if a person gets his desired job he can incessantly get involved with it without getting bored. For example, two years ago when I passed my school I was in a similar dilemma to choose money or my hobby. Accordingly, I ended up choosing my hobby and took admit in computer science course. Due to my love towards computer I never felt that the course was hard or the assignments we are getting is making us tired. Instead, I enjoyed a lot doing my projects and do my best in submitting it on time. moreover, my love towards the subject actually helped in making me the renowned student in the eyes of the professors who taught me. if I had not taken my course in which I my interest was, I would have not been able to strive in the computer science field for so long.
Secondly, working in your interested field always motivates a person to learn more about that specific field. if a person is working in his desired profession he will have the hunger to learn more so that he can master that field and become a pundit. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. After my graduation from the college I got employed in the company. There I find out that my college curriculum is way behind what the industry is using in real world. Since, I have love towards technology I decided to learn all the new softwares by which I can cope up with the pace of the real world. moreover, during the learning process if I ever felt that a topic is difficult then my predilection always helped me in making me persist to work hard and gain the knowledge. Therefore, I feel that working in a chosen field is necessary for advancement in career.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that a person should always go for the job which he likes. this is because it will help him to bear all the pressure of work and not feel enervated and because it will also help to keep hunger of learning inside him awake, which is imperative for advancement in career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39246119734 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48277431873 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472283813747 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4338243082 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0454545455 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122635808866 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380478527697 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032865251804 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706948130869 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330441238505 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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