People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties in modern life. Some read; some exercises; others work in their garden. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
No one can deny that there are number of solutions that one can follow a to reduce stress. if I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose travelling as the best way to lower stress. it is my firm belief that a odyessey can obviously help lowering the stress for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, a journey to a hill station will be refreshing to a person as well as rejuvenating. The fresh air in the hilly areas and the beautiful valleys around would make the person forget his problems and instead enjoy the soothing atmosphere. I had to admit that my own opinion has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was in the last semester of my college placement sessions were going on. A number of companies were visiting the campus to recruit students. Unfortunately, I was not able to crack any interviews in that session. The number of rejection faced during the period made me lose confidence and which ultimately resulted in me going toward depression. Then my friends observed my condition and decided to go on a tour with me to a hill station. By breathing fresh air and finding my self in the lap of nature made me forgot all the tensions and difficulties in my life. As a result, when I returned I was full of confidence and have the courage to persist myself in the difficult time. if my friends have not made the plan for a tour, I would have been still fighting the hardships with negative mentality.
Secondly, jaunt to a new place can sometimes result in providing us an opportunity to start afresh. there are comes a scenario when we are busy doing a task but get stuck in between while completing it. Such a situation make us feel the stress and look for the solution but we are unable to find because our mind have stopped working. there is no rise of any new idea which can solve the problem. Drawing from my own experience, when I was studying in my tenth class I was given an assignment on history of taj mahal. Initially, I was able to get the content to write few pages of it. but after that I was not able to find any new information and made me stuck in the middle of the assignment. As the days progressed my tensions increased as the deadline was near. my father learning about my problem decided to take me on a journey to taj mahal so that I can get the material to write in my assignment. The tour to place was very helpful for me as it filled my brain with enormous knowledge about the location which was sufficient for me to complete the assignment. As a result, after returning I was able to think of the novel approaches to solve the problem in which I was previously stuck and was able to submit the designated work on time. if my father had not taken me to taj mahal, I would have received scolding from my teacher and low grades in the subject.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that best panacea for stress is going for a tour.This is because it makes the person forget the difficulties in life, and because it helps in making our brain function properly which have been impaired by the stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2596.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 583.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45283018868 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60350577271 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463121783877 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6878502319 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1481481481 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5925925926 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801697386329 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237222930702 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366181593184 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753118596999 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453693153658 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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