Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Informational technologies, especially internet, has made people's lives much easier and comfortable. In this era, we use internet frequently by either in front of computer or taking our smart phones, and as a result, conversation between two or more people has become faster and more elaborate than ever before. personally, i believe that it is much more helpful for people who are planning to do project and want better a result to communicate through e-mail. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, some people express their opinions better through e-mail than in person. this phenomenon usually applies to introverted people who need more time to think and plan because they are usually nervous around people and because of other people's presence they can't concentrate and could make rushed decisions. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. I'm a highly introverted person and i get anxious around new people. this affected many things in my University years. At one time, i enrolled in a mandatory class which requires the skill of presenting in front of classmates frequently. The presentations were for team work and each team must be consisted of at least three people or more. becoming a teammate for new people was really difficult for a person like me, and when we talked in our group, i usually sat silent because i was nervous, but talking throughout e-mail or message chat group really helped my situation and in fact i made really good points for our presentations.
Secondly, people usually think twice before talking with other people through e-mail or message. On the other hand, if people talk in person about an important project, decisions are made fast but without careful analysing and there may be bad tempered or rushy people who could affect the project badly. For instance, my friend works at a project managing company that shifts from one project to another depending on customers' demands. The company has a rule of meeting every week besides having online forum where workers can express themselves and make their voice sound. this company's work usually peaks during November and December, and because of lots of projects, the meeting policy is statistically worsen during this two months because of rapid demands, there are higher chances of projects to be failed, but the online forum usually make best decisions for it giving workers a time to think and analyze.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that using e-mail or other messaging methods for various projects are better in some ways. this is because some people can't express themselves better in person and emailing give people time to ponder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04017857143 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60186196911 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7807131311 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.842105263 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208637046132 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684020832305 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058726078584 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135106752941 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144750009734 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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