Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to the issue that when the students doing their project together they will learn more effectively than when each student works alone to complete his project, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the students learn more effectively when they are working together. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the students learn more effectively when they are doing their project together. Working together help the students to solve hard problem more easily than when each one of them trying to solve it by himself. Eventually, the students will save the time and the efforts that they need them to complete their task. And that give each the student a chance to learn knew things from his friends that he may not learn them if he studies alone.
Another point why I advocate the attitude that it is better for the students to work together to accomplished their assignment because each one of them will be motivated by other. If each student knows what his team’s members doing, he will try to manage his resource in order to help the team as his colleagues doing. And eventually, they will reach their goal and get best results because each one of them doing his best. While when the student studies alone he may waste his time without noticing that.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that working together will help the students in the future. Working in a team will prepare the student to be effective leader in the future. Additionally, they will learn how to discussed their thoughts an idea without conflicting with others whom have different opinions.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people whom hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecause each one of them doing his best. While when the student studies alone he may w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88918918919 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43451712469 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47027027027 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2137383119 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333501214196 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133791131853 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124604492297 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187988608754 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124900968547 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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