Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe
When it comes to the issue of the best way to travel is in a group led by guide, Some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that travelling with the group led by guide is the the best way because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding this issue in the following paragraphs:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that travelling with the group led by guide will save effort and the time which they need to discover the best place and the restaurants which suit us. The guide visit the place many times ago. So, he has a good background which can help us to enjoy our trip without need to waste our time looking for the best things to do. Eventually, this will make us see many thing even if our trip is short.
Another reason why I advocate that traveling with group led by guide is very good idea because I think it is very interesting. If we travel with the group led by guide, we will share different games and jokes which makes even the long road very interesting and funny. Also, by this we may make new friendships with the group members and such friendship may last for a long time.
Finally, it is a well-establish fact that travelling with group led by guide may our trip organize because the guide put a plan for the trip previously and such plan should follow by the group that mean no waste for the time spent with un interesting things.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...avelling with the group led by guide is the the best way because there are so many reas...
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Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...avelling with the group led by guide is the the best way because there are so many reas...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
...he restaurants which suit us. The guide visit the place many times ago. So, he has a ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...o do. Eventually, this will make us see many thing even if our trip is short. Another r...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an for the trip previously and such plan should follow by the group that mean no ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48850574713 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31909192209 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485632183908 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.893859775 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277962702976 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11141112354 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899582167623 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144459371161 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979739276128 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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