Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue of that children should not be allowed to waste their times playing video games, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the children should not spend their time playing video games because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion it is widely understood that video games waste the children’s time. If the child spends his time on the video games, he will hate going to the school or doing his homework. Eventually, the child will loss his concentration. So, the parents should put limited time to play video games during a day.
Another point why I advocate that the children should not be allowed to play video games for long time is that they will become so lazy. If the child become addicted on the video games, he will not be excited to play with his friend. Eventually, he will spend a long time sitting instead of playing with others.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that when the child spends long hour alone to play video games, his ability to communicate with other will be decrease. Eventually, this will effect on his future specially when his work forced him work with other. Additionally, the parent will not be able to talk with their children and advise him.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinion are overwhelming too much to be ignored
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76971608833 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39986598491 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488958990536 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4950502576 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282579933985 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112876873193 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802377167177 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157047715953 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937865447287 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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