Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that most advertisements make products better than they really are, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that. I believe that most advertisements make products better than they really are because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point o view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that most advertisements make products better they really to attract customers. Advertisement is the single greatest determinant of the product succeed in the market. So, the advertisements mention just the good points of the product in order to increase the sell of the products. However, the bad things of the products are neglect in the advertisements. On the hand, obviously the costumer may find many bad point that the did not know about the products, when they look to the products in the real.
Another point why I advocate that advertisements make products better than they really are because the rapid development of the technology today. In the advertisement they use the technology to make the product look very good and nice. Additionally, the size may seem different in the advertisement. Moreover, the use of the technology to enhance the look of the product make the costumer trust the products and bye it because such things have great impact on the person opinion. Moreover, the costumer’s opinion may change frequently with each advertise and that makes the company improve their advertisements.
Finally, it is a-well established fact that the competitions between the manufactures today are very high. So, each company tries to win the race by advertising their products in many different ways. For instance, they focus on the point that attract the costumers and trying by say overwhelmingly and magic things.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ave great impact on the person opinion. Moreover, the costumer's opinion may change...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...company improve their advertisements. Finally, it is a-well established fact t...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e race by advertising their products in many different ways. For instance, they focus on the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10752688172 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89471572334 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486559139785 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0732045423 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270921282112 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909320406179 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839729028498 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142422100954 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930480247422 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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