Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A prevalent topic undergoing serious debate is traveling, specially in the group. In our modern era in general, people encounter many distressing and unsettling circumstance to four winds, thus, needless to say that we need relaxation. In my opinion the best way to relaxtation is traveling in group. I strongly believe that when we want to travel in a group we need a leader in order to creating better time along the travel. In what follows I will delve into some conspicuous aspects that persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first point I would like to make is that leaders have knowledge about travel, traveling is their job , so absoloutly, they know more than us about traveling, they traveled more and more time and have experience about this. Let me illustrate that in other words. Suppose that you want to travel to the one city for the first time in the group. If you don`t have any leader or person that help you, you don`t know what you should exactly do, on the other hand, if you have a good leader, he or she helps you to do the best. For example, he knows that where is the hotels or where is the best restaurants,fastfoods or local foods, In addition, he knows almost all of the things that related to that city , such as tourists places,prices, paths and etc. Sometimes without tour guide or any experience about that place, you may lost many interesting places,special foods or more experiece.
The second reason coming to my mind to substantiate and indicate my stand point concerning this issue is that, by tour guide you don`t have any concerns about travel. Nowadays with daily stresses and pressures, we want relax and calm time when we are traveling, and the best choice about point that I mentioned is traveling with the tour giude.
My personal experiece is a compelling example of what I mean. Two years ago when I was traveled with my friedns to the north of the country, we decided to travel by the tour. When arrived, the leader told us the plan of exactly what we are going to do in there. For instance, he said that for first day we go to the forest from 10:00 am until 2:00 pm and after that comback to the hotel and etc. We knew that what will be happend and their planned for every moment that we had there. That was one of the best travel I ever had.
Drawing upon the reason, although there are always some exception which are ecluded from the general rule, I do agree that if you want to travel, I highly recommand you do it in a group led by a tour guide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in general, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52401746725 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58876443951 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502183406114 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6098081927 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26517819643 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801910705281 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732306564728 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162593725098 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684374226915 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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