Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
All over the world, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on people`s mind regarding gathering the best and realible information from news about events. There is a dramatically growth in news resources by the galloping rate of technology. In numerous circles of researchers and experts, whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that some news resources is enough for well-informed, on the other extreme of the rope, opponents believe, in order to be well-informed, you should gather from many different news resources. I from my vantage point, the latter attitude carries more weight. I will delve into some conspicuous aspects which persuade me to put forward this this perspective.
To begin with, we should search many diffrent news resources such as channels news on tv, weblogs, online news, BBC news and etc, to find the best and reliable news because we don`t know which one is true and tell us the fact. To fullfill such a requirement, we shuld acheive to the unanimous between resources. However by improving technology and variety of resources we can become well-informed faster than past.
The second reason coming to my mind to substantiate and indicate my stand point concerning this issue is that some news resources related to especial person like politician,governmental person or like the news that show in the government`s channel. Most of them have a specefic goal and they are advocate or opponent to the particular person or state, thus they prefer to offer(supply) news by their approach which has benefit for they. Some times they axaggerate, hide the truth and tell the news in wrong way. On the other hand,some weblog or website resources is personally, they write their own point of view, not the exactly happened. Let me illustrate that with the compelling example what I mean. Afew days ago incredible protests occured in my country against icreasing price of fuel. In order these protests, schools and university closed. In government`s channel tv told that they closed becuse the air pollotion and wheather condition, they hide the truth, or when this news wanted to tell the number of killed people, they told wrong number, in contrast, the foreign news that were happy of these protest and prefer to provoke the people, exaggerated events, even told the number of killed people twice than the real number. In order to what I mentioned, find the truth and fact is too hard in situation like this and it`s not happening until we get information from many diffrent news resources.
Drawing upon the reason, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I agree that if we want to become well-informed we should gather and search many diffrent news resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mation from news about events. There is a dramatically growth in news resources by the galloping rate...
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...spects which persuade me to put forward this this perspective. To begin with, we should...
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...s resources such as channels news on tv, weblogs, online news, BBC news and etc, ...
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...the news in wrong way. On the other hand,some weblog or website resources is personal...
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... occured in my country against icreasing price of fuel. In order these protests, ...
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...lled people twice than the real number. In order to what I mentioned, find the tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, whereas, i mean, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10572687225 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91118524227 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6273232993 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.777777778 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235050589147 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692165213834 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665572168063 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155402531568 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030568736593 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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