Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally,I agree with the statment; I think games has important role in our lifes, and also it has many advantages that we can use of it in our lifes.When we were a kid, the thing that we always wanted it, and we prefered to spend all of our time on, were, game. Definitly we can`t find a thing that has impact more than the games on children. The following paragraphs will explain my some reasons for this opinion.
First point that I would like to make is that, games gives us the apportunity to simulation future life when we are kids. For instance, when I was a child, I were playing a game with other kids that, each of us had independent character in that game,let me illustrate it in another ways.For example my role were Dad, my behavior should have been like a dad,I should gone to work,I should teached or adviced my children . It shows that, we had an vision earlier that we will become a dad,however it was not more than a playact or unreal situation.Other piont that I would like to make is that, most of games has wins and loses .As all of us know that, humans always want be a winner,but with the games we can understand that life not always be that thing we want and we can`t always be a winner. In addition, we learned that, we should attempt, we should try hard to be a winner, and nothing is free. Moreover, we can use game to improve our bodies,minds,ability of learned nad many etc. For example, the school where I have been a student in,had teachers that tried to teaching lessons with games, because when you are play a game you don`t think to anything and just focus on game, so you absolutely learn that thing,and we always waited for those classes.we always were happy and had good and fun time and never those classes become boring for us.
Overall, i`m sure it is clear from these analysis, that games is one of the most necessary things in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47564469914 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55885816372 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.48536079 48.9658058833 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.2 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157623096788 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690390499534 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380142103513 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935105158088 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473742301326 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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