Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
through the years, a question which is a matter of debates, a controversial one, is, whether teachers were more appreciated by society in the past or now. As we all know, teachers have a important role in the societies and sometimes soiciety success is depend on they. It`s a little hard to reach a consensus about this isuue, however, in numerous circles of experts and pedagogicals, whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that, teachers were more appreciated in the past. On the other extreme of the rope, opponents believe, nowadays teachers have more respect in the society that they were in the past. While both sides have their own position, from my vantage point, the first attitude carries more weight that I will explain bellow.
To begin, the first point I`d like to make is that, in the past, the number of teachers were fewer from now, in addition, in the past their career were more important and superior from other vocations, but in our modern era and developing of people`s knowledge, teachers become less respectful, because scholars and people that have more knowledge than teachers increased. Let me illustrate that in oder word. My father explaines that, when he was a children a few teacher exsisted and they were many popular. All people in my father`s era had special respect for teachers and they were more appreciated by people and society than they are nowadays.
The second reasons coming to my mind to to substantiate and indicate my stand point is that, nowadays need for teacher decreased. By developing technology people can increase their knowledge without teachers. For instance, they can surf the net and study by watching videos or electronic books and essay and many other information. My own experience is a compling example that what I mean. I`m a selfstudy. I study english from videos for example in the youtube, and many online books, I use people`s experience that shared in the internet and I improve my knowlege.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exception which are excluded from the general rule, I do agree that, teachers had more respect in the past than now. To recapitulate the reasons, nowadays teachers are more from the past, also by developing the technology people can study without teachers and can rely on themselves instead of teachers help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70342574833 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4864137158 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.117647059 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270333123407 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892585061725 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717962431223 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171723721931 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652866715579 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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