Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout the ages, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on people`s mind regarding studying better. Technology is developing so fast that people couldn`t keep up with that unless they keep increasing their knowledge. In numerous circles of researchers and pedagogical experts, whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that understand idea and concepts is more important than facts, on the other extreme of the rope, opponents believe learning facts has more benefit, while both sides have their own positions, I from my vantage point, the latter attitude carries more weight. In what follows, I will delve into some conspicuous aspects which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
Needless to say that fact is always be fact and never changed. Since the dawn of humanity, human always attempt to find the facts, and understand what is true and what is false. Personally, I believe that we should build our lives by facts instead of idea and concepts, because if you know fact you are confident. Let me illustrate that in other words. We don`t know ideas and concepts that we want to learn is true, we not sure about is it right or not. We can`t learn things which didn`t clarify. my personal`s experience is a compelling example of what I mean. When I was younger, I went to the party with my father that all of the guests were older than me. At the dinner time, they talked about one issue that I have been read some concepts on the weblog that related to that issue. Suddenly one of those said the thing that I believed it was wrong because I exactly read that thing on the weblog. I said my opinion immediately with the high self-confide. After that everyone told me that it was wrong and I strongly ashamed. I learn that I should understand the facts than concepts and idea that have not any evidence and credit. However Today with the galloping rate of science and technology no one can turn a blind eye to the numerous effects of internet and it`s source and weblogs. In conclusion I strongly believe that learning fact is more important that ideas and concepts because fact always is true and proved, in contrast, idea and concepts that doesn`t have any reliable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: been
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87239583333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68543505133 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7593896295 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4736842105 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166288934992 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446549257963 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536643804517 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132174043212 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148310770045 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.