Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to
study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific
reasons and examples to support you
This statement, is one of the most popular issue for discussing. In my opinion, I disagree with
the statement; I think always study mathematics and science is more important than other
lessons. The following paragraphs will explain some reason for this opinion.
The first point I would like to make is that, in our society, parents and most of the people
believe that, the person who study science and mathematics is superior than anyone who study
other lessons. I think they believe that because, they think anything harder is intersting.
This belief, came from past. Let me illustrat that with another way. In the past most of the
people are farmer and they had not knowlage about science or mathematics, and if there was a
person who could treat people whith his or her science, he had especially role in their people
society and everyone respected him. Other point that I would like to made is that, nowadays,
people who has science or mathematics knowlage, is more successful than other. Most of them
have better salaries than other people, people respecting more to them and has good view of
them. In addition, people who study mathematics and science believe that in the future, she or
he has good career,good salary,also has successful life than other don`t study these lessons.
Moreover, as all of us know,we need science and mathematics in our lives and they are necessary
factors in our lives. For example, if you can`t count,or don`t know how multiplay two number,
definitely, we can`t use money and have a dificult life. An other example is, if we don`t know
about science, and we get stock in one place that no one exist there and have an injoury, we
can`t survive if we don`t know how fix that. Overall, I`m sure it is clear from these analysis
that mathematics and science is more usful and more important in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.221875 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59572043548 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50625 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7042532024 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223164249421 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800711778533 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668457673789 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739990995661 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069523333288 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.