The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world

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The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world

Most people agree that the Internet affects society in many different ways.In my opinion, the most prominent effect of the Internet is that it has strengthened democracy.I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.To begin with, online investigative reporting plays a major role in exposing political corruption and in keeping politicians honest.In the past, there were only a limited number of news outlets and they often had deep connections to powerful politicians and were hesitant to criticize them. These days, however, there are many independent publications on the Internet that are willing to expose political misbehavior.For example, an online magazine recently published a story revealing that the mayor of my hometown had taken bribes from a propertydeveloper.The report was so detailed and well-researched that the mayor had no choice but to resign.Although the evidence was not hard to locate, only this independent website was willing to write about it.This example demonstrates how the Internet helps to strengthen democracy in the modern world.Secondly, the free exchange of ideas foundonline motivates people to become politically active.In countries all over the world, people use social networking services to share their ideas and opinions.While in the past people might have thought that they were alone in their beliefs, they can now realize that others share their ideas. My own experience demonstrates this concept.When I was a university student, I learned that a municipal park near my residence was going to be demolished to make room for a parking lot.This bothered me a lot because I enjoyed spending time in the park.At first I thought that there was nothing that I, as an individual, could do to stop this from happening.However, I later joined a Facebook group dedicated to opposing the plan.When the members of the group learned how many people in the city loved the park we were happy to get together and enthusiastically protest in front of city hall until our voices were heard.I think that finding each other on that Facebook group gave us the courage to actively protect our park.In conclusion, I strongly believe that the Internet has strengthened democracy in modern society.This is because online investigative journalism plays a big part in keeping politicians honest, and because social networking sites encourage people to be politically active

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32637075718 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19848350789 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582245430809 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

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Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 127.0 20.1344086022 631% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.100928411 48.9658058833 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 680.0 100.406767564 677% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 127.666666667 20.6045352989 620% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 45.0 5.45110844103 826% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 114.0 5.5376344086 2059% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936562318768 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646797318834 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214368967514 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936562318768 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 67.5 11.7677419355 574% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -65.89 58.1214874552 -113% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 6.10430107527 362% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 54.0 10.1575268817 532% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.26 8.01818996416 178% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.8 10.0537634409 525% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.