Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There have been some moot points about whether workers are more satisfied when they have different types of duties during the workday or when they do similar tasks. The question of this issue has aroused as a subject of controversy among academicians. When it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that various tasks during the workday are more satisfied for workers. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that humans psychologically tend to have a variety. Similar fulfillment is very tedious and boring for them. To be more specific, diversity leads to boost their energies and workability. As a case to the point, I vividly remember when I was a student at the university. In one semester, I had a site investigation project in a site which need to work one month on this site. Due to being in a site this project was very monotonous for me. Thus, I decided to request my professor to change my site and let me do my project on various sites. This issue gives rise to tempting me to implement my project by satisfying manner. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that variety is very important for working.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that doing various tasks lead to work among different labors which improve workers communication with other workers, therefore, workers can make more relationship. These relationships are very important and enhance their chance of finding more job opportunities and other activities. My personal example demonstrates this reality, according to the aforementioned reason, when I got professor permission to work in various sites. I familiarized with different persons who some bodies of them were very expert in their field. One of them was a civil engineer who suggests me to establish a corporation in tandem. This opportunity helps me to fortified my information and advanced in my field. My personal example shed some light on the point that different tasks have many advantages for workers.
According to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that doing different tasks are more satisfied by workers because not only these activities are not tedious for workers but also create more friendship opportunities for them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06598984772 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9741601489 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.27686581 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0476190476 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250430404271 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692301165263 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965880752044 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183187161092 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945560347486 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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