Youngsters’ distribution to the communities has been a global burning issue for years. When mentioning this essence, varied individuals will have diverse opinions. Some citizen argue that young people nowadays do not spend enough time helping their communities. Personally, I strongly agree with argument.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is the tension of today’s life. The fact is that youngster are living in a competitive and high living cost world. Therefore, there is a likelihood that they have to thrive in order to make a living and meet the bill. Given such condition, it is necessary for them to devote a lot of time to working at the company. As a result, it goes without saying that they cannot have time to participate in some community activities. Without doubt, tension of life plays an important role in reducing the youth’s time spent for helping the communities.
Secondly, technology development is undoubtedly of paramount importance. It is widely known that due to advent of advanced technology, the youth often spending hours sticking their eye to the screen. There is a high chance that they are occupied with the latest games or chatting with their friends. Accordingly, the idea of joining a community activities may seem different since youngsters are not familiar with that activities. Therefore, there is no likelihood that they will think about participating in some community events. With no doubt, technology advancement is a major factor contributing to the deterioration in the youth’s time spent for community.
On the other hand, some people might say that nowadays the young, especially students, have a tendency to join some clubs or activities. Therefore, it helps to strengthen the idea that the youth are devoting more time to serve the community. However, this opinion is not always true. In fact, the youth’s reasons behind taking part in some activities or clubs have nothing to do with helping the community. Actually, their purposes are to improve their resume to impress the interviewee in order to get a good job or get in a good university. Furthermore, the youth are often urged to join in the activities. It probably affect their awareness since they will think that joining these clubs are chores. Beyond any doubt, the idea that the youth are sending more time to help community is often possible to end in collapse.
In conclusion, today’s life tension, technology improvement and bad awareness are the convincing reasons for my agreement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ill have diverse opinions. Some citizen argue that young people nowadays do not spend...
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Line 4, column 628, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... to join in the activities. It probably affect their awareness since they will think t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19708029197 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99421558796 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501216545012 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7191017813 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.44 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.44 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162635395947 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04621167303 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702278529987 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979812397326 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685381192957 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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