Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy the life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Both young and old people want to enjoy their lives. Going out to visit the world, having fun with some delicious food, watching the movies, dancing, playing are some ways to enjoy temporal human life. I think old people cannot involve themselves in activities to enjoy like the young people. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, food is one of the main sources from which people can find enjoyment of life. We know that good food is the prerequisite for celebration in our life. My own life is a compelling example for this. I am a food loving person and always cook tasty foods and invite my friends to enjoy it together. I consider food as the greatest blessing from God. That’s why, I feel sorry for the person who cannot eat these tasty and yummy foods because of their disease like diabetes, high blood pressure, heart disease etc. I also cannot imagine having a life when certain types of foods will be restricted to me. Young people enjoy their life as they suffer less from diseases that are much common among older persons.
Secondly, traveling and watching the movie outside are another means to enjoy the life. Older people are not able to travel all places because of their physical problems and they do not have the desire to watch movie. For instance, my grandfather loved to climb mountains but due to his age, he cannot do that anymore. On the other hand, he could easily climb to mountains in his early ages. My grandmother used to go to cinema halls with her friend to enjoy movies when she was young but now she is very busy with the religious activities. It is seen that people tend to be religious in their old ages because they fear the death. So, because of physical inability and religion, old people can’t enjoy life in later ages.
As we have seen in this essay, young people can enjoy their life compared to the old people as they have physical soundness, less age and less concern for religion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61971830986 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26452244248 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1659992038 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238576649001 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785413542633 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544528399001 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157885953811 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280157431309 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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