Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our world have been changed by the extreme impacts of globalization. Advances in technologies, communication, and human rights, have a significant influence on people's life style. In this new arrangement of world society, the role of young people have increasingly intensified, and there are more respects to their opinion, especially in crucial issues which are related to the future.
Governments are going to be more and more democratic, and all people, especially juveniles are more involved on critical decisions. Political system of majority of countries have become democratic since 20th century. Rulers of countries are elected by people and they should be responsible to them as well. This trend tend to be rise in countries which already moderate by dictator governments. Different crisis and rebellions in Middle East like what happened in Egypt is crystal clear witness for this claim.
Information technology and social networks have facilitated young people's opinion to be heard by governors. There are many media which have helped people to propagate their opinion. For instance, Facebook and Tweeter are two internet base social networks which have had many strong effects on tendency of governments and world society, majority of their users are juveniles.
As young people are more well-informed, and are more educated, they are more hired in vital management positions. Universities are one of cradles of modern civilization. Today, we can rarely find young people who do not have desire to study in graduated courses. There are many erudite young people who are available to lead critical parts even to be a leader of country. There are some piece of evidence which prove this claim like Canadian prime minister which is too young, but have achieved pioneering situation.
Today, our world is more advanced comparing to past in many respects. Technological advances is just part of the story. The remarkable advance is actually in social changes in the world, and involvement of young people in decision making is one of these important changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'pieces'?
Suggestion: pieces
... be a leader of country. There are some piece of evidence which prove this claim like...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278236914601 0.229887763892 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.157024793388 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.132231404959 0.0866891130778 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0468319559229 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0247933884298 0.0685040099705 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110192837466 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86753323902 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0413223140496 0.0887237588012 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00550964187328 0.0209618222197 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0247933884298 0.0139019557991 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2075.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 328.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3262195122 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396341463415 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301829268293 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237804878049 0.174417080927 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143292682927 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86753323902 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.9033413763 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2631578947 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5188106086 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.210526316 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.446084724 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.8313253012 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245079470908 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106056679319 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678436253499 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515361819934 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134250990526 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936834242012 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520861527978 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29156755041 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0429823992833 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16629922135 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541213038109 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.