Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern life has a significant impact on human lifestyle. In the past, people almost were not recruit for a company or institute, and professionalism were not as prevailing as what we see on the present. In the past, people were working on personal agricultural fields coincidently with working at home. Although being an expert in one field has remarkable economic impacts, working if variety of tasks likely to be more satisfactory for workers.
Diversity is one of the fundamental desires of human, and people tend to experience variety of situations. People like to experience different situations. In this way they will fill that they are more effective, and more efficient. According to pyramid of basic needs which invented and explained by Maslow, the finite desire of people is the sense of accomplishment which just acquire when people spent their time in different experiences. For instance, psychological statistic shows that people who work on different task are less disappointed and more successful in doing them completely.
People could show their different abilities during working on different types of tasks. Working on different tasks could give people more opportunities to hire in the jobs which are more related to their ability. Besides companies could find some talents, and could promote them in their filed. In this way companies could reach to higher profit too.
Doing similar tasks every day, may cause some physical and mental problems in workers. Nowadays, obesity is one of the significant problems of people all over the world. For example, people who are working in offices, spending all the day at the desk without any extra activity, will be in the danger of heart attack and obesity. On the other hand, lack of exercises and activity could have mental effects like filling stress. Doing different tasks at work likely to solve some parts of this problem.
To recap, people are not so free to select their job circumstances, but they already have some basic needs which companies and government should be noticed about them. Diversity is one of these needs which is so important, but there is not sufficient attention to it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recruited'.
Suggestion: recruited
...le. In the past, people almost were not recruit for a company or institute, and profess...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232142857143 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.147959183673 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107142857143 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510204081633 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0331632653061 0.0685040099705 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137755102041 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0459183673469 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75287957264 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280612244898 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688775510204 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255102040816 0.0209618222197 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229591836735 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2171.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13276836158 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361581920904 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262711864407 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19209039548 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138418079096 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75287957264 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.3182887582 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6521307978 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.9711864407 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.79120879121 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27694656452 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134560865245 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100658114745 0.0752933317313 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51451072406 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131612588608 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101353030191 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561043308953 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235862440306 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0728243161076 0.067059652881 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166539889137 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053639354824 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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