Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Workers are the one the most important pillar of success in each society. workers are who trying to improve the industry which have a significant role in flourishing the society. Some people believe that diversity in the tasks of the workers make them more satisfied than doing same things, whereas some others hold an opposite attitude. In my view, employees who do various tasks during day are more reluctant for two remarkable reasons.
The main reason is that doing different tasks gives workers more energy which cause them feel better. When people get involve in doing various tasks, they get more confidence that they are so talented and could finish several things in one they. This positive energy helps them feel better and makes them satisfied. For example, When I worked in apple company, during day I did similar tasks which made me bored. After talking to my boss, he altered the situation which provided me with several responsibilities. As time went, dealing in different tasks increase my belief in my abilities. Therefore, feeling better about my job encourage me to try harder which improve my efficiency. If I had not done various tasks, I wouldn't feel reluctant about my job.
Second, dealing in different tasks leads to prospers in one’s job which make workers more satisfied. If people accomplishing several task, they will gain valuable experience which equipped them with useful knowledge that can use in doing their responsibilities more accurate and getting better result. For instance, statistics demonstrate that there is direct relation between number of tasks workers involve and the rate of their success in their career. Researchers' investigation among two group of workers reveals that employees who deal with several tasks during a day could get promotion earlier due to not only they could get large amount of information in various fields, but they also get more familiar with divers aspects of their work. Under such a circumstance, employees get better result and feel better about their job. As you can see, doing different tasks make workers more reluctant.
In conclusion, I do believe that the advantages of doing various tasks during a day over weight the benefit of doing similar thing. Not only do workers get more energy and motivation, but they also become more success in their career. I think all workers should pay more attention to benefits of doing different tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Workers
...tant pillar of success in each society. workers are who trying to improve the industry ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ncy. If I had not done various tasks, I wouldnt feel reluctant about my job. Secon...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'prosper'.
Suggestion: prosper
...nd, dealing in different tasks leads to prospers in one's job which make workers mo...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'several tasks'.
Suggestion: several tasks
...more satisfied. If people accomplishing several task, they will gain valuable experience whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13567839196 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59892895368 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492462311558 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2873723037 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346709008612 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11477589404 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858726205793 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242764312371 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530003663933 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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