Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The rules in society is one of the important pillar in leading the society to flourishing. Society consists of various people with different perspectives who need some rules to guide their efforts toward success. Some people believe that today's society provide stricter rules for youth to obey than past, whereas some others hold an opposite attitude. In my view, young people today face with more serious laws than before for two remarkable reasons.

The main reason is that today's society pay more attention to prosperity of youngsters which cause it to adopt strict laws. In today's competitive world, all countries understand the value of science in their society thriving. Since they know that the young people are the future builders of society who should equip with the vast knowledge and technology, they provide strict rules to guarantee the future of them and their country. For example, when I was young, I live in a society where there were no significant rules for young to follow. As a result, because I have less experience, I left my education and decided to work. The work place was not suitable for my age, so I learned negative behaviors like smoke. Under such a circumstance, not only I totally ruined my future, but also I couldn't help my society to flourish. If the society had strict laws that prevent me from leaving my education, I would be more successful.

Second, nowadays, by increasing the population society requires stricter rules to control the community. When the overall condition of societies like food supply improves than past, it provides better condition to increasing the population. In a crowded society fulling of young people, there is more irregularity. Hence, society needs more serious laws to handle the community better. For instance, the statistics demonstrate that there is direct relation between the quality of handling a society and its rules. Researchers' investigation among to society reveals that the society with strict rules has better management due to the vast number of youth in this society obey the rules and support the government in this sever process. In contrary, in other society which has no serious laws the rebellious youth cause several problems and although governments try harder could not monitor the society in could quality. As you can see, it is vital for today's community to have strict rules for young people.

In conclusion, I do believe that in today's progressive world it is necessary for societies to adopt strict laws for youth. Not only strict rules guarantee the youth future success, but they also are really needed by today's populated societies. I think that each community should pay more attention to provides youngsters with serious rules to follow.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...oward success. Some people believe that todays society provide stricter rules for yout...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...e reasons. The main reason is that todays society pay more attention to prosperit...
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Line 5, column 686, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to negative'.
Suggestion: to negative
...s not suitable for my age, so I learned negative behaviors like smoke. Under such a circ...
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Line 5, column 792, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... I totally ruined my future, but also I couldnt help my society to flourish. If the soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, second, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11973392461 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63381783285 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49667405765 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7404327565 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.391304348 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271942233353 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843245539439 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507413060588 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186352010748 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00534335439548 0.0645574589148 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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