Actually, young people today do have influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society. Generally, old people were also young in the past.Vieing through the history, we can find some answer. At present, there are some significant changes propeled by young people. Meanwhile, the young peopl will be older ones, the next young generations would be on the historical stage to prompt the world's development, in that the wheels of the history never stop. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, I'd like to hold the opinion that we should have the changing eyesights toward the world. It is interseting to speak out and consider the words " I am not the one I was yesterday." In another word, the old people were young decades ago. So lets find out what they did. 100 years ago, thousands of Universities students and workds in Beijing set out to strike for the mother countries' rights in that after the failure in the WAR I, Germans lost the cotronl of JIaozhou peniinsula in China but the meeting in Paris did not agree to return the land to China, instead, the Japanese took the power which intriggered the anger from the students, from that day, 4th May movement, China's history changed, as the new era was opened by these passionate students, some of them became the leadership of the New China.
In addtion, the young people are changing the world now. Once there were some vertebrate thoughts in people, one of which was the marrigements between two sex. While today, due to the development of the world , more and more countires or states make it legal for gay marriage, which was unbelievable. Even in California, people would find 8 sex when they need to fill some forms , let alone the tolites with 3 sex. This big change is propeled by young people form generation to generation.Gay love was seldom in the past while now, it looks more like a kind of sex liberation all over the world.
Finally, look at the children, they are the future of the world and what's more, they will absolytely on the historiacal stage to change something that we can not imagine now. Once there was a story about the NASA, as the engeineer wanted to invetn a kind of pen using in the space shuttle that never lacks of ink, they tried to hard to design while still got nothing. Once they turned to the Newspapers for help from all over the country. Then the got a letter from a child who saw the advertisement, he said, "Why not pencil?". Every engineer was shocked that why they did not figure this idea out. Now this was another story from an old person who was a little kid decades ago. Now looking at the children, they would not solve the pen problems like their grandparents while there would be more amazing things they would shock us, this is called "progress".
In all, I'd like to predict the future from the past, and seize the present day, the young people would have great influence on the whole world by important decisions..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, look, may, so, still, then, while, kind of, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2472.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69070208729 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59761213605 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.62775072 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9545454545 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140228452604 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516533093714 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900752543344 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106304217091 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822811273244 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.